High Concept

Writers never stop learning, and sometimes I wonder why I didn’t figure certain things out before now. Things my kids understand from their study of script writing, that sails right past me. Stuff that is not always easy to get my thoughts to grasp.

I’d been working on a sequel to One Murder Too Many, the book my agent is shopping right now, and I was making progress. I like One Ransom Too Costly and am enjoying the writing, but what if the first book in the series takes a while to sell? There are other projects, of course, but nothing that fits my chosen romantic mystery/suspense genre.

So my oldest son, Jeff, and I started brainstorming Friday night. And he brought up a point I had not seriously pondered before. I’d heard of it, but not really let the idea sink in. It’s that thing called “high concept.”

High concept is the bigger picture, the idea that is unique yet attractive to readers, something universal. Jeff’s a great teacher, and he helped me grasp what this meant through the medium of movies.

Take some of my favorite romances – Runaway Bride, for instance. The high concept of that story is that “she runs away from weddings” (and from commitment to a man), and of course we want to know why.

Pride & Prejudice carries the well-known plot device of the wealthy lover sacrificing pride and position (in the eyes of his peers) for the beloved. Such sacrifice is a high concept.

Titanic – highest grossing movie of all time – why? Because it carried the highest concept of all – the lover sacrificing all for the beloved. Like Romeo and Juliet. Like God’s love for us. (There is no greater love than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends…Jesus’ words.) The background of Titanic was a historical tale, but the love story is what gave the story that unique attraction.

So I started thinking about high concept. And Jeff sent me to a screenwriter’s website called Word Player. They have some great articles on the subject that I’m not done reading. Their word for high concept is “strange attractor” meaning strange (unique) and attractive (compelling). Many movie scripts fail for lack of a good concept.

The more I brainstormed and the more I’ve read, I’ve come to realize that this is what is lacking in many stories today. If other authors are at all like me in the way I’ve been writing, they/we come up with an idea and put the story together without really knowing that high concept. Then when we are asked to sum up our story in one sentence, we struggle to do so. We describe what happens in a paragraph and then try to condense that down to thirty words or so. But that may not be the high concept at all. It may be what happens in the story and the story may be compelling, but does it have that unique appeal that will compel the reader to keep reading? That will appeal to a wide audience or just a select few?

My brainstorming did produce some new ideas, one of which I think is a good concept, and the funny thing is, that concept, which could also be the answer to the “what if?” questions, is what brings excitement back into writing. Today I sat down and wrote over 1500 words because the idea compelled me to write it down.

My friend (who brainstormed with me on the phone last night) had some very good advice. She said to write the story that you have a passion for because in the end if you write just as a business and not from that passion it will show in your writing.

John Grisham said he tries to make every book his best book yet. That only comes with high concepts and passion for the story.

That’s my goal…we’ll see if I can make it happen. :)

Free Book Giveaway!

Join me today (and yesterday if you scroll down) on Favorite Pastimes blogspot for my interview with author Lynn Austin. Lynn is a wonderful writer and her Biblical fiction is some of the best on the market!

If you post a comment on the Favorite Pastimes blog, you’ll be entered in a drawing to win one of Lynn’s books – the first in her “Chronicles of the Kings” series Gods & Kings. I read the first three books in this series many years ago, then read them again to my sons during our history portion of homeschooling. (And I almost never read a book twice!

If you’ve ever wondered about King Hezekiah or the intrigue surrounding him (and there is a lot of it!), read these books! (They will make you want to read the Scripture story for yourself.) And if you enter the drawing, maybe you’ll get the first one free. If you can’t post on Blogger, email me directly and I’ll enter you in the drawing.

I guarantee you will enjoy this read! (And Lynn’s answers to my questions are great too!) :)

Truth

What is truth?

Pontius Pilate asked Jesus that question right before he ordered His execution. In our relativistic society today, it begs an answer.

Jesus could have told Pilate – Truth is standing in front of you but you can’t see it. He didn’t. Maybe because in true talk-show-host fashion, Pilate wasn’t really interested in truth. And he didn’t expect an answer.

The disciples, on the other hand, wanted to know. Right before he was arrested, Jesus told them He was going away, but that He would come back and take them to be with Him. They didn’t understand and asked how they could know the way. Jesus said, “I am the way, the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father but by me.” (John 14:6)

People today think that truth doesn’t really matter – that what is true for you may not be true for me. That gets us into a lot of trouble, doesn’t it? So if my neighbor’s truth is to kill me because I do not believe as he does, and he follows through on his belief, how can we say his truth doesn’t matter to me? His “truth” wants to kill my truth, and to take my life! (This is just an example – I have fairly nice neighbors.) But do you see the point?

There is a truth out there that is always true. It’s true, like it or not. Whether you believe it or accept it, the truth isn’t going to go away.

In the book of Revelation the apostle John has a vision and is told by the risen Christ to write letters to seven churches. In chapter three verse seven, he tells the church at Philadelphia that the letter he is writing comes from “He who is holy, He who is true.”

Jesus is the truth, and He does not lie. People lie all the time. Satan lies. Sometimes it’s hard to tell the truth from a lie, and Christians need to ask God for discernment to know – is this thing I’m hearing true?

I read an article in our local paper yesterday about the Orthodox church and how a former Lutheran minister prayed and felt God calling him to leave the Lutheran church to join the more traditional Orthodox church. This ancient branch of Christianity is famous for “engaging worshippers’ senses, from the scent of incense and sound of chanting to prayerful reflection on colorful icons…with its centuries-old style of worship and timeless celebration of the mysterious power of saints.” Mysterious power of saints? Dead people have no power, Christian or not. Only God is mighty to save.

As for using incense and looking at religious icons to help our prayer life, this sounds like idol worship. If a Christian wants inspiration in prayer, step outside at night and consider the heavens and pray as King David did, “When I consider Your heavens, the work of Your fingers, the moon and the stars, which You have ordained, what is man that You are mindful of him, and the son of man that You visit him?” (Psalm 8:3-4 NIV)

Apparantly many people are joining this denomination because they want to be part of a church with old traditions and ancient style worship. They find comfort in orthodoxy.

But the only real comfort is in knowing the truth. Jesus said, “You shall know the truth (which is really knowing Him), and the truth shall make you free.” (Author’s insertion.)

One might say, but this minister prayed and felt God leading him. I’ve prayed and felt God leading me too, and I’ll admit, God’s leading can seem subjective at times. But God’s leading must match up with God’s truth. If a church is putting traditions over Scripture and ancient practices don’t line up with God’s Word, it isn’t true, and God isn’t the one doing the leading.

Truth is true all of the time. God is true all of the time. Jesus is God.

And Jesus’ words are truth.

More Marketing Thoughts

I joined a Christian version of MySpace tonight. It’s called ShoutLife, and I created a profile there today. It was actually kind of fun. I haven’t checked out MySpace or You Tube much yet, but I’ve heard that more and more authors, among other artists, are using them to promote their work – or get noticed one way or the other.

I think it’s great to find realitively inexpensive ways to market our work, and if it doesn’t mean a lot of travel or time consuming energies, I’m willing to check it out. Of course, anything we do takes some of our time. The question comes in – is the time or expense invested worth the outcome? For authors that means, does it sell more books or get our work into the hands of more readers?

Some suggestions for marketing don’t interest me. One was to use pop up ads for advertising. I understand the idea behind the suggestion. But pop up blockers were created because pop up ads are annoying, and the last thing I want to do is annoy the people I want to reach. So you won’t be seeing any pop ups on my website – sorry. :)

Lots of authors create newsletters too. I think a newsletter is a good tool, and someday I hope to have one myself, but if I do one, it will only be a few times a year. I’ve seen some authors send them out every month and others quarterly. For me, I like quarterly. I’m afraid I wouldn’t be able to keep up with monthly anyway! :)

But I’ve got to hand it to my fellow authors out there. Many of them are coming up with creative ways to reach their readers – to get their books into the hands of the people they have written the books for in the first place. The hardest part is to come up with something that is different than what everyone else is doing. How to be unique and still gather interest? Are we all becoming a dime a dozen – all doing the same things to get people to buy our books? Does that really make a bestseller?

I don’t know, statistically speaking, but I know what I like as a reader. I read books by my fellow authors because I know those authors – or because someone recommends the book. (There’s nothing like having a friend tell you that you have got to read this book!) Another reason I read a book is because the copy in a catalog intrigued me. Cover design is also a big plus both in a catalog or a brick and mortar bookstore. If the cover grabs me, I’ll pick up the book. If it doesn’t and I don’t know the author, then I’ll probably pass it by. I don’t have time to read all the back cover copy on every book. But if the cover art is inviting, it will make me pause and check it out. Add that to a grabber on the back cover and a genre that interests me and I’ll probably buy the book.

I enjoy receiving catalogs from Christian Book Distributors – a real paper catalog – especially the fiction one – so I can leisurely leaf through it and see what’s new. But then I shop online most of the time. It isn’t as easy to leaf through a catalog online. And I don’t often get to the bookstore, and when I do, many of my friends’ books aren’t there!

So the author does have a responsiblity to bring her book to the reader’s attention, but I’m not sure exactly how to do that – how I would want to find out about new books as a reader other than what I’ve already said. It still helps for publishers to buy ads in book catalogs, in my opinion.

Ah well…it’s not like I need to market my books yet. They’re not even in print! But it’s good to have ideas and think about these things ahead of time. Because someday I’m hoping I will hold those books in my hands…and not just my dreams. :)

Updates

We’ve got ice on the trees here in Michigan but at least the roads are clear. In our area the storm wasn’t as bad as they predicted.

A couple of things I want to mention – the historical blog where I am a co-host has moved. Blogger, for reasons unknown to man, decided to update their service and changed to something called a Beta system. In the process they lost our blog. Actually the old blog Favorite Pastimes is still there but it’s stuck on December 24th when I posted the second part of the story of Christmas. The new blog is now called Pastimes. At least for now.

Next week on the Pastimes blogspot, I’ll be interviewing author Lynn Austin. Lynn had some fabulous answers to my questions about Biblical fiction – so I hope you’ll pop over and check it out. Try next Monday and Tuesday, January 22 & 23. And Lynn will be giving away a free book – her Biblical novel Gods & Kings. I’ve read this book under it’s original title and can tell you it is great! If you think you know King Hezekiah…you’ll be pleasantly surprised to know him better still! And if you don’t know of him at all, you’re in for a treat!

Lastly, don’t forget that the words in the right hand corner of my website Seeking Treasureland are actually a link to click on my short children’s story of the same name. The story is free for you to share with whomever you wish. Pass it along, link to it, send others to read it – if you like it yourself, of course. :) The link isn’t as pronounced as some and people may overlook it, thus the reminder.

Grace and peace to all,

Understanding why…

When we face various trials or suffer the pain of defeat or rejection or failure, one question will surface even if we try to squelch it. That question is – Why? Not necessarily why me? But why did this happen? It is the cry of the human heart, is it not?

Yet God doesn’t always tell us – actually, most of the time we just don’t know. If we’re wise, we will ask the Lord to teach us from the trial so we can grow and learn from it. But whatever lesson we do learn doesn’t necessarily tell us why the trial happened in the first place.

I can look back on my life and say that I miscarried our first child so that our son Jeff would be born. The timing wouldn’t have allowed for both of them. And I can say that we didn’t get the house we wanted to purchase 19 years ago because God had this one in mind instead. We can guess at reasons for any number of circumstances, though truthfully, only God really knows.

On the other hand, I do think we can have a glimpse of “why” some of the time. I was thinking today about all my years of writing (over twenty) and how long I have waited to see my publishing dream fulfilled. Then I look at my sons just beginning to follow their dreams into film and music and writing, and the road could be bumpy or smooth. But even a smooth path will have pot holes now and then. The truth is, life is hard. It takes courage and faith and perseverance to fulfill the work God has for each of us to do. Maybe I’ve begun to learn that. Maybe my waiting and sticktoitiveness hasn’t been about me at all. Perhaps I am simply an object lesson for my sons.

The apostle Paul says in II Corinthians 1:3-4 “Blessed be the God and Father of our Lord Jesus Christ, the Father of mercies and God of all comfort, who comforts us in all our tribulation, that we may be able to comfort those who are in any trouble, with the comfort with which we ourselves are comforted by God.” Emphasis added

And later, when he is writing to Timothy, he explains why he, the worst of sinners should experience God’s amazing mercy. “But for that very reason I was shown mercy so that in me, the worst of sinners, Christ Jesus might display his unlimited patience as an example for those who would believe on him and receive eternal life.” Emphasis added

Paul is telling us that in a sense we can know “why” things happen to us. We may not know the reason for a specific event – such as we lost one baby in order to be able to have another – but we can know that as we are comforted in our trial, we can in turn comfort someone else. When my kids face delays or rejection or criticism of their dreams, I know what they’re going through because I’ve been there. The same is true for anyone we know that is facing something we too have faced. It happens to us so we can comfort them. We are Christ’s ambassadors and His examples.

But to be the example, we have to learn the lessons He would teach us. Seek to understand why with an eye toward growing closer to Jesus, and in turn helping others do the same.

Marketing Class

I’m taking a marketing class through AFCW for the next few weeks, taught by author Cyndy Salzmann. (See my Spotlight archives to learn more about Cyndy.) We’ve only had two lessons so far, but I’ve already learned a lot.

For one thing, when I began writing, I never thought much about who would read my work. I wrote the book I longed to read because I couldn’t find it anywhere else. I cut my writing teeth on a two volume Biblical epic of King David’s life. Thankfully, nobody published it, though I did garner a request for the complete manuscript from a major publisher. I wanted to see it in print back then, but God, in His wisdom had other, better plans.

I’ve written seven more full-length novels since then (total of nine) and am working on number ten. Though I have always written with the hope of being published, I really hadn’t thought of my reader. Who was she? What are her hopes, her struggles, her dreams? Why does she read, and what is her life like? Cyndy got the class thinking seriously along those lines, and in writing a reader profile I learned that deep down, I did know my reader. I’d just never put her profile into words.

How will this help in marketing my work someday? Well, Cyndy hasn’t gotten that far yet, but I think it will help me to see the person in my mind’s eye. I’m not just writing for me any more. Someday someone out there might read my books, and I want them to touch her life in a significant way, to see herself differently perhaps, but most importantly, to see God – to meet with Him in a way she hasn’t done before. Several novels have had a positive impact on my Christian walk over the years. I hope that my work might do the same for someone else. Perhaps my reader and I can learn together in this. :)

Speaking of writing, I don’t have it posted on my Projects page yet, but my son, Jeff, helped me come up with my title for book three in my Lakeshore Chronicles series.

Book One – One Murder Too Many (won 1st place in the romantic suspense category of the 2006 Genesis Contest)
Book Two – One Ransom Too Costly (current wip – work in progress)
Book Three – One Secret Too Deadly

Like them? I’ve got the Bible verse to go with it, but now it will be fun to figure out just what that deadly secret will be. :) One Murder Too Many is in the shopping stage of publishing, with some interest. If you think to pray about it – please pray that God will open the right door for this series. And that I’ll be able to market the books to the readers who need them most.

Thanks!